Weekly Reflection: Commercial Illustration - Poppy Design

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I returned to the development of my poppy design for my commercial illustration module when I was working on the write up and realised due to my recent development with my cute characters, I was able to notice things within the design which could be altered and improved in order to create a much more visually appealing design.

Following these adjustments I have decided to use this design as my final submission rather than my previously mentioned design. This is because when placed side by side the poppy design is a lot more eye catching, plus following my investigation into product mock ups I was able to identify that this design seems a lot more visually striking, which in turn improves its functionality.


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